UU Kommo-o

[Rae]

Kommo-o @ Leftovers
Ability: Bulletproof
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Dragon Claw
- Close Combat
- Earthquake / Poison Jab

Kommo-o, UU's devasting Dragon-type destroyer, makes itself a terrifying wallbreaker with Swords Dance boosting it's power to amazing heights, coupled with it's solid natural bulk and Speed, and Bulletproof which lets it ignore Sludge Bomb to set up on two of the best defensive Pokemon in the tier: Amoonguss and Tangrowth. Kommo-o thrives on bulky offense and offense teams, breaking teams apart early for its teammates to clean up later. Earthquake is an excelllent midground option, slamming the likes of Nihilego and Tentacruel, as well as being able to hit Aegislash who is immune to Close Combat. Poison Jab, however, is able to OHKO Primarina and Togekiss after minor chip. Kommo-o appreciates hazard support from Pokemon like Nihilego and Krookodile, helping wear down checks like Primarina. Nihilego can pressure Primarina and switch into Salamence for Kommo-o, while Krookodile checks Aegislash for Poison Jab variants. Cleaners like Lycanroc-D and Azumarill love Kommo-o's wallbreaking prowess and ability to take advantage of both Amoonguss and Tangrowth. Zarude and Thundurus make for excellent pivoting support for Kommo-o, luring in Amoonguss and Tangrowth for it to set up on.

 

[Rae]

this is ready for qc!

 

[Estarossa]

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Kommo-o @ Leftovers
Ability: Bulletproof
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Dragon Claw / Outrage
- Close Combat
- Earthquake / Poison Jab

Kommo-o, UU's devasting Dragon-type destroyer, makes itself a terrifying wallbreaker thanks to Swords Dance boosting its offensive power to amazing heights, coupled with it's solid natural bulk and speed. Talk a bit about how its bulk and ability provide it natural set-up opportunities versus stuff like tang/amoong. Kommo-o thrives on bulky offense and offense teams, breaking teams apart early for its teammates to clean up later. While Outrage has the higher base power, Dragon Claw prevents Kommo-o from being locked into and lets it handle the Fairy-type Pokemon that'll want to switch into it with Poison Jab, like Primarina and Togekiss. bit strangely worded with this as a place to bring up pjab instead of vs eq, ties in better when u compare it to eq cause your comparing ability to hit aegi with ability to break prim/kiss. Are there any rolls +2 Outrage gets? something nice you can mention for the comparison Close Combat is Kommo-o's other strong STAB move, heavily denting Rock and Dark-types like Lycanroc-D and Moltres-Galar. Earthquake is an excelllent midground option, slamming the likes of Nihilego and Tentacruel, as well as being able to hit Aegislash who is immune to Close Combat. Kommo-o greatly appreciates hazard support, giving it a much easier wallbreaking, which makes Rhyperior, Krookodile and Roserade excellent partners for it. Cleaners love Kommo-o's wallbreaking prowess and are able to finish off opposing teams, so the likes of Lycanroc-D and Azumarill are also noteworthy partners. Talk a little about clangers abliity to take advantage of the regen grasses for them imo. Nihilego is by far Kommo-o's greatest ally, providing both hazard support and the ability to clean up teams thanks to Beast Boost would ditch this bit for space since you aren't rly running speed booster except on beam sets which aren't as great rn and u already comment on hazards. move it up with the other hazards setters too imo, on top of providing an answer to Primarina and Salamence, two of Kommo-o's best checks.

I'd kind a want a mention of stuff that checks Aegi if you run Pjab here honestly, you can sorta combine the krook point and also mention like moltres-galar maybe for this.

This was a bit long so I'd look at cleaning up some of the fluff a little, you also don't need to explain basic stuff like what STAB-moves hit here esp on a spotlight. Tag me on Disc when you've implemented this and I'll have another look.

 

[Estarossa]

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Kommo-o @ Leftovers
Ability: Bulletproof
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Dragon Claw / Outrage
- Close Combat
- Earthquake / Poison Jab

Kommo-o, UU's devasting Dragon-type destroyer, makes itself a terrifying wallbreaker thanks to Swords Dance boosting its offensive power to amazing heights, coupled with it's solid natural bulk and speed Bulletproof is so important to mention here for this bit which lets it set-up on two of the best defensive Pokemon in the tier: Amoonguss and Tangrowth. Kommo-o thrives on bulky offense and offense teams, breaking teams apart early for its teammates to clean up later. Earthquake is an excelllent midground option, slamming the likes of Nihilego and Tentacruel, as well as being able to hit Aegislash who is immune to Close Combat. Poison Jab, however, is able to OHKO Primarina and Togekiss after minor chip. Kommo-o appreciates hazard support from Pokemon like Nihilego and Krookodile, helping wear down checks like Primarina. Nihilego can pressure Primarina and switch into Salamence for Kommo-o, while Krookodile helps check Aegislash for Poison Jab variants. Kommo-o greatly appreciates hazard support, giving it a much easier wallbreaking, which makes Rhyperior, Krookodile and Roserade excellent partners for it. Nihilego is by far Kommo-o's greatest ally, providing both hazard support and it's ability to check Primarina and Salamence, two of Kommo-o's best checks. Cleaners love Kommo-o's wallbreaking prowess and ability to take advantage of both Amoonguss and Tangrowth, well not all cleaners do specifically, move this bit so it comments on those 2 cleaners specifically liking it. so the likes of Lycanroc-D and Azumarill are also excellent partners.

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QC 1/1. If you have space after this, you could consider adding something on pivots like Zarude/Thundy.

 

[Rae]

check complete, sent to gp!

 

[Adeleine]

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Kommo-o @ Leftovers
Ability: Bulletproof
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Dragon Claw
- Close Combat
- Earthquake / Poison Jab

Kommo-o, UU's devasting Dragon-type destroyer, makes itself a terrifying wallbreaker thanks to Swords Dance boosting its offensive power to amazing heights, coupled with it's with Swords Dance boosting its power to amazing heights, solid natural bulk and Speed, as well as Bulletproof which makes it immune to Sludge Bomb, which lets it set-up and Bulletproof, which lets it ignore Sludge Bomb to set up on two of the best defensive Pokemon in the tier: Amoonguss and Tangrowth. Kommo-o thrives on bulky offense and offense teams, breaking teams apart early for its teammates to clean up later. Earthquake is an excelllent midground option, slamming the likes of Nihilego and Tentacruel, as well as being able to hit Aegislash, (AC) who which is immune to Close Combat. Poison Jab, however, is able to OHKO Primarina and Togekiss after minor chip damage. Kommo-o appreciates entry hazard support from Pokemon like Nihilego and Krookodile (RC) helping wear down checks like Primarina. Nihilego can pressure Primarina and switch into Salamence for Kommo-o, while Krookodile helps check checks Aegislash for Poison Jab variants. Cleaners like Lycanroc-D and Azumarill are also excellent partners. love Kommo-o's wallbreaking prowess and ability to take advantage of both Amoonguss and Tangrowth. Zarude and Thundurus make for excellent pivoting support for Kommo-o, luring in Amoonguss and Tangrowth for it to set up (removed hyphen) on.

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[Rae]

Check complete!

 

[Eisenherz]