In preparation for the poll tomorrow I've done a legality check on all current final submissions. I'm doing this to be nice and to give everyone a head's up, apologies for the pings.
Ziggizagoon lel
Species name incorrectly capitalised
Sword entry should read 'there have been tales about how Chromera once melted a city'
Shield entry should be in the future tense 'Once angered, Chromera will paint patterns with the acid on its tail, burning through anything it touches.'
Brambane
Sword entry should read 'galar's history' or 'galarian history' not 'galar history' and would then be too long
Gekokeso
Shield entry: CHROMERA should be uncapitalised
NoahIOTJ
Sword entry is too long: 157 characters (with spaces)
Shield entry is too long: 174 characters (with spaces)
Explosion Badger
Shield entry: 'itself' messes with the plurals in the sentence slightly, changing the position could help
Apathetic Inaction
Sword entry is too long: 158 characters (with spaces)
Shield entry: Subject is hard to parse in second sentence - would read better as 'those that are stolen from' but would then go over the length limit
Ayecrusher King
Shield entry is too long: 208 characters (with spaces)
Tommaniacal
Sword entry: Grammar is a bit confusing I would rephrase the first clause to "Many famous artworks are actually fakes!" and go from there to tweak.
Shield entry: Use amongst instead of among
LordThemberchaud
Shield entry is too long: 38 words and 190 characters (with spaces)
StarFalcon555
Shield entry is too long: 178 characters (with spaces)
Bandkrook
Sword entry is too long: 174 (with spaces)
Shield entry is too long: 175 (with spaces)
Bice
- Sword entry: 'in some of the most iconic paintings' is missing a subject - add 'world's' in between 'the' and 'most'
- Shield entry: subverting doesn't seem like the best word to use here grammatically, something like ruining would work better
King Of Moths
- remove s from 'exists' in Shield entry
Ubertrainer2000
- Species name is missing an 'r' in Chromera
LowenCraft
- All references to Chromera are missing an 'r'