Gen 8 Please rate my Nat Dex OU team

[4eliks]

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Pinsir-Mega @ Pinsirite
Ability: Mold Breaker
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Quick Attack
- Earthquake
- Return

Pinsir is very powerful wallbreaker,it have strong STAB(Return) and buffed priority STAB move(Quick attack),earthquake can do big damage too,it can deal with toxapex,non-baloon heatran,aegislash,any electric/rock/steel pokemons which have resist to air attack,also pinsir have INCREDIBLE 409 attack in mega(Jolly nature) We can use Hyper cutter to prevents attack lowers ,but i use mold breaker vs rotom and "Unaware" users before i use mega evolution

252 Atk Aerilate Pinsir-Mega Return vs. 252 HP / 252+ Def Gliscor: 141-166 (39.8 - 46.8%) -- guaranteed 3HKO
+2 252 Atk Pinsir-Mega Earthquake vs. 248 HP / 252+ Def Toxapex: 266-314 (87.7 - 103.6%) -- 25% chance to OHKO
+2 252 Atk Aerilate Pinsir-Mega Return vs. 252 HP / 252+ Def Tapu Fini: 297-351 (86.3 - 102%) -- 12.5% chance to OHKO
+2 252 Atk Aerilate Pinsir-Mega Return vs. 252 HP / 252+ Def Eviolite Chansey: 601-708 (85.3 - 100.5%) -- 6.3% chance to OHKO

Nihilego @ Life Orb
Ability: Beast Boost
EVs: 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Sludge Wave
- Power Gem

Nihilego is a BEAST(It is a wordgame) With HP ice it can OHKO landorus ther,gliscor,dragonite,garchomp and other pokemons,which is very problem to this team.Thunderbolt can deal with toxapex,corviknight and other fly/water tanks. Sludge Wave/Power gem is good stab moves which can deal some damage.I choose this evs cuz i want to max my damage and speed,Life orb help it.Nihilego also have good types and SpD to pinsir

252 SpA Life Orb Nihilego Thunderbolt vs. 248 HP / 252+ SpD Corviknight: 203-239 (50.8 - 59.8%) -- 84.8% chance to 2HKO after Leftovers recovery
252 SpA Life Orb Nihilego Thunderbolt vs. 252 HP / 4 SpD Toxapex: 187-221 (61.5 - 72.6%) -- guaranteed 2HKO
252 SpA Life Orb Nihilego Hidden Power Ice vs. 252 HP / 40 SpD Landorus-Therian: 385-458 (100.7 - 119.8%) -- guaranteed OHKO
252 SpA Life Orb Nihilego Hidden Power Ice vs. 252 HP / 168 SpD Gliscor: 354-416 (100 - 117.5%) -- guaranteed OHKO

Tapu Fini @ Leftovers
Ability: Misty Surge
EVs: 240 HP / 228 Def / 40 SpD
Naive Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Taunt
- Nature's Madness
- Moonblast
- Defog

Tapu fini is our defogger(Sorry for this nature,this is a missclick) taunt is good option VS chansey,blissey and other.nature madness also help to deal with chansey,moonblast will deal a good damage to weavile or cheap damage to other pokemons

252 Atk Salamence Dual Wingbeat (2 hits) vs. 240 HP / 228 Def Tapu Fini: 102-120 (29.9 - 35.1%) -- approx. 7% chance to 3HKO
252+ Atk Choice Band Haxorus Iron Tail vs. 240 HP / 228 Def Tapu Fini: 144-170 (42.2 - 49.8%) -- guaranteed 3HKO
252 Atk Excadrill Earthquake vs. 240 HP / 228 Def Tapu Fini: 123-145 (36 - 42.5%) -- guaranteed 3HKO
252+ Atk Choice Band Buzzwole Earthquake vs. 240 HP / 228 Def Tapu Fini: 138-163 (40.4 - 47.8%) -- guaranteed 3HKO
252 Atk Choice Band Rillaboom Grassy Glide vs. 240 HP / 228 Def Tapu Fini in Grassy Terrain: 272-324 (79.7 - 95%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Grassy Terrain recovery
252+ Atk Choice Band Zapdos-Galar Brave Bird vs. 240 HP / 228 Def Tapu Fini: 229-271 (67.1 - 79.4%) -- guaranteed 2HKO

It also have good types to help garchomp and ferro

Garchomp @ Rockium Z
Ability: Sand Veil
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Stealth Rock
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- Swords Dance

Garchomp is our lead with stealth rock, with 252 atk it can also do a cheap damage to other pokemons

252 Atk Garchomp Continental Crush (180 BP) vs. 252 HP / 252+ Def Eviolite Chansey: 260-306 (36.9 - 43.4%) -- guaranteed 3HKO
252 Atk Garchomp Earthquake vs. 252 HP / 252+ Def Ferrothorn: 97-115 (27.5 - 32.6%) -- 70.4% chance to 4HKO after Leftovers recovery
252 Atk Garchomp Continental Crush (180 BP) vs. 252 HP / 252+ Def Tapu Fini: 129-152 (37.5 - 44.1%) -- guaranteed 3HKO after Leftovers recovery

Ferrothorn @ Rocky Helmet
Ability: Iron Barbs
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Relaxed Nature
- Leech Seed
- Thunder Wave
- Knock Off
- Protect

Ferrothorn is very bulky tank,he can tank so much,he has good types to tank the electric(x2 mega pinsir) rock(x4) and it also has protect which helpful for heal with leech seed,knock off which can knock the scarfs and thunder wave which can slow the opponent.

252 Atk Excadrill Earthquake vs. 252 HP / 252+ Def Ferrothorn: 102-120 (28.9 - 34%) -- 1.5% chance to 3HKO
252 Atk Choice Band Weavile Icicle Crash vs. 252 HP / 252+ Def Ferrothorn: 118-139 (33.5 - 39.4%) -- guaranteed 3HKO
252 Atk Choice Band Kartana Sacred Sword vs. 252 HP / 252+ Def Ferrothorn: 226-266 (64.2 - 75.5%) -- guaranteed 2HKO
252+ Atk Choice Band Haxorus Close Combat vs. 252 HP / 252+ Def Ferrothorn: 282-332 (80.1 - 94.3%) -- guaranteed 2HKO
252 Atk Salamence Dual Wingbeat (2 hits) vs. 252 HP / 252+ Def Ferrothorn: 84-98 (23.8 - 27.8%) -- approx. 89.5% chance to 4HKO

It is very good phys tank)

Greninja @ Choice Specs
Ability: Protean
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Dark Pulse
- Ice Beam
- Surf
- Hidden Power [Fire]

Greninja IS VERY GOOD when it have Hidden Power Fire cuz it can OHKO any ferrothorn and 2HKO full SpD corviknight,we can deal ~20% to chansey with one attack.

252 SpA Choice Specs Protean Greninja Hidden Power Fire vs. 252 HP / 252+ SpD Ferrothorn: 328-388 (93.1 - 110.2%) -- 62.5% chance to OHKO
252 SpA Choice Specs Protean Greninja Hidden Power Fire vs. 248 HP / 252+ SpD Corviknight: 204-240 (51.1 - 60.1%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Stealth Rock and Leftovers recovery
252 SpA Choice Specs Greninja Surf vs. 252 HP / 4 SpD Eviolite Chansey: 120-142 (17 - 20.1%) -- possible 5HKO after Stealth Rock
252 SpA Choice Specs Greninja Dark Pulse vs. 248 HP / 8 SpD Toxapex: 123-145 (40.5 - 47.8%) -- 59% chance to 2HKO after Stealth Rock
252 SpA Choice Specs Protean Greninja Hidden Power Fire vs. 252 HP / 4 SpD Skarmory: 336-396 (100.5 - 118.5%) -- guaranteed OHKO




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I really don't like this garchomp, I do not know what to put instead this,please,recommend other pokemon(I can put Stealth rock on ferro)

 

[awyp]

Hi 4eliks , welcome to Smogon! I am locking your RMT for the time being as the forum rules require that you provide at least three lines of descriptions for each Pokemon to explain their roles. Please read the rules carefully and look at Team Showcase to see the detail we require. PM me with updated descriptions, and I will be happy to unlock this. Also, feel free to PM me if you need help or have any question. Have a nice day!

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[awyp]

Unlocked, thank you for sending updated descriptions.

BUMP

 

[red fintans]

looks like a solid team, if u dont like chomp u can have like hawlucha or smt to really drive home flyspam