Copyediting Double Dance Enamorus (QC 2/2) [GP 0/1]

[DaRotomMachine]

[SET]
name: Double Dance
move 1: Iron Defense
move 2: Calm Mind
move 3: Draining Kiss
move 4: Earth Power
item: Leftovers
ability: Overcoat
nature: Bold
evs: 248 HP / 224 Def / 36 Spe
tera type: Water / Steel / Fairy

With its already good defensive stats and setup moves in Iron Defense and Calm Mind, Double Dance Enamorus-T is an excellent wincon that is difficult for opponents to remove once it starts setting up. Draining Kiss is important to help keep it healthy while or after setting up. Earth Power gives Enamorus-T coverage against the Steel-, Poison-, and Fire-type Pokemon that resist Draining Kiss with the exception of Moltres and Rotom-H. Leftovers gives Enamorus-T some recovery while it sets up. The EV spread gives it enough Speed to outspeed uninvested Registeel and anything slower while being as bulky as possible. Enamorus-T benefits a lot from Terastallization; Tera Water gives it a resistance to Steel, which helps it take on Iron Head users such as Cobalion and Jirachi. Tera Steel removes its Electric weakness and grants it a resistance to Steel as well as an immunity to Poison, which grants it a Toxic immunity and helps it take Revavroom’s Gunk Shot and Gengar’s Sludge Bomb and Sludge Wave, but it requires being more careful around Fire-types. Both Tera types also give Enamorus-T a resistance to Ice, which prevents Pokemon like Ice Beam Empoleon from weakening it to the point where it can be revenge killed.

Enamorus-T fits best on bulky offensive teams that allow it to set up and sweep late-game once its checks have been chipped or removed. Moltres is one of Enamorus-T’s best answers, so teammates that can lure it in such as Stone Edge Cobalion and Mienshao are good to have. Enamorus-T also appreciates entry hazard support, as they can chip down Fire-types that it struggles with, so hazard setters like the aforementioned Cobalion and Hippowdon are good partners with Enamorus-T. Thundurus-T also gives Enamorus-T trouble, so teammates that can deal with it such as Assault Vest Cyclizar or your own Thundurus-T are appreciated. Because this set does not run Heavy-Duty Boots, hazard removal is important to ensure that Enamorus-T is as healthy as possible when attempting a sweep, so teammates like Cyclizar or Maushold are appreciated.


[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/darotommachine.651420/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/rarelyme.513635/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/fluff.614438/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/techno.527276/

 

[DaRotomMachine]

QC ready I think

 

[Rarelyme]

qc 1/2

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With its already good defensive stats and set-up moves in Iron Defense and Calm Mind, Double Dance Enamorus-T is an excellent wincon that is difficult to remove once it starts setting up. Draining Kiss is important to help keep Enamorus-T healthy while or after setting up as longevity is what helps this set function. Earth Power gives Enamorus-T coverage against Steel types such as Cobalion and Revavroom and other Pokemon that don’t take much damage from Draining Kiss. I think you could emphasize more on Earth Power being a perfect coverage move since it hits every Pokemon (except Moltres) that resists Fairy type attacks like Volcanion for Fire types, Empoleon/Jirachi/Revavroom for Steel types and Fezandipiti/Gengar for Poison types. Leftovers gives Enamorus-T some recovery while it sets up. The EV spread is meant for Enamorus-T to outspeed uninvested Registeel and anything slower, while being as bulky as possible. Terastallization helps Enamorus-T's ability to set up by helping it defensively; Tera Water gives Enamorus-T a Steel resist which helps it take Steel Type attacks like the aforementioned Steel Type’s Iron Head. also helps for ice coverage from mons like empoleon that weakens it and makes it easy to rk (same for Tera Steel) Tera Steel however removes its Electric weakness and also gives Enamorus-T a Steel resist as well as a Poison which helps it take Revavroom’s Gunk Shot and Gengar’s Sludge Bomb/Sludge Wave. but it requires being more careful around Fire types which can now beat enam

Enamorus-T fits best on bulky offensive teams that allow it to set-up and sweep late-game once its checks have been chipped or removed. Wallbreakers such as Choice Band Terrakion are great teammates for Enamorus-T as they can break past and weaken teams so Enamorus can set up and sweep, as well as beat Moltres and Cobalion, some of Enamorus-T’s checks. Most importantly you need something to lure in Moltres like Stone Edge Cobalion which can also act like a wallbreaker, Mienshao is also a good one but purely offensive + also need hazard support by Cobalion mentioned above or hippowdon (not mandatory but sandstorm pairs pretty well with enam). Because this set does not run Heavy Duty Boots, hazard removal is important to ensure that Enamorus-T gets a safe switchin, so teammates like Cyclizar or Maushold are appreciated. add something to deal with Thundurus like your own Thundurus (with Sludge Wave or Knock Off to a lesser extent)

 

[DaRotomMachine]

qc 1/2

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With its already good defensive stats and set-up moves in Iron Defense and Calm Mind, Double Dance Enamorus-T is an excellent wincon that is difficult to remove once it starts setting up. Draining Kiss is important to help keep Enamorus-T healthy while or after setting up as longevity is what helps this set function. Earth Power gives Enamorus-T coverage against Steel types such as Cobalion and Revavroom and other Pokemon that don’t take much damage from Draining Kiss. I think you could emphasize more on Earth Power being a perfect coverage move since it hits every Pokemon (except Moltres) that resists Fairy type attacks like Volcanion for Fire types, Empoleon/Jirachi/Revavroom for Steel types and Fezandipiti/Gengar for Poison types. Leftovers gives Enamorus-T some recovery while it sets up. The EV spread is meant for Enamorus-T to outspeed uninvested Registeel and anything slower, while being as bulky as possible. Terastallization helps Enamorus-T's ability to set up by helping it defensively; Tera Water gives Enamorus-T a Steel resist which helps it take Steel Type attacks like the aforementioned Steel Type’s Iron Head. also helps for ice coverage from mons like empoleon that weakens it and makes it easy to rk (same for Tera Steel) Tera Steel however removes its Electric weakness and also gives Enamorus-T a Steel resist as well as a Poison which helps it take Revavroom’s Gunk Shot and Gengar’s Sludge Bomb/Sludge Wave. but it requires being more careful around Fire types which can now beat enam

Enamorus-T fits best on bulky offensive teams that allow it to set-up and sweep late-game once its checks have been chipped or removed. Wallbreakers such as Choice Band Terrakion are great teammates for Enamorus-T as they can break past and weaken teams so Enamorus can set up and sweep, as well as beat Moltres and Cobalion, some of Enamorus-T’s checks. Most importantly you need something to lure in Moltres like Stone Edge Cobalion which can also act like a wallbreaker, Mienshao is also a good one but purely offensive + also need hazard support by Cobalion mentioned above or hippowdon (not mandatory but sandstorm pairs pretty well with enam). Because this set does not run Heavy Duty Boots, hazard removal is important to ensure that Enamorus-T gets a safe switchin, so teammates like Cyclizar or Maushold are appreciated. add something to deal with Thundurus like your own Thundurus (with Sludge Wave or Knock Off to a lesser extent)

Implemented Rarelyme ready for QC 2!

 

[fluff!!]

qccheck

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With its already good defensive stats and set-up moves in Iron Defense and Calm Mind, Double Dance Enamorus-T is an excellent wincon win condition that is difficult to remove once it starts setting up. Draining Kiss is important to help keep Enamorus-T healthy while or after setting up as longevity is what helps this set function. Earth Power gives Enamorus-T coverage against the Steel-, Poison- and Fire-type Pokemon every pokemon (except Moltres) that resists Draining Kiss such as Volcanion, Jirachi, and Gengar, with the exception of Moltres and Rotom-H. Leftovers gives Enamorus-T some recovery while it sets up. The EV spread is meant for Enamorus-T to outspeed uninvested Registeel and anything slower, while being as bulky as possible. Terastallization helps Enamorus-T's ability to set up by helping it defensively; Tera Water gives Enamorus-T a Steel resist which helps it take Steel Type attacks like the aforementioned Steel Type’s Iron Head take on Iron Head users such as Cobalion and Jirachi. Tera Steel however removes its Electric weakness and also gives Enamorus-T a and grants a Steel resist as well as a Poison immunity which grants a Toxic immunity and helps it take Revavroom’s Gunk Shot and Gengar’s Sludge Bomb/Sludge Wave, but it requires being more careful around Fire types which can now beat Enamorus-T. Both Teras however also give an Ice resist which prevents mons Pokemon like Ice Beam Empoleon from weakening Enamorus-T to the point where it can be easily revenge killed.

Enamorus-T fits best on bulky offensive teams that allow it to set-up and sweep late-game once its checks have been chipped or removed. Moltres is one of Enamorus-T’s best answers, so teammates that can lure in Moltres such as Stone Edge Cobalion and Mienshao are good teammates to have. Enamorus-T also appreciates hazard support, so hazard setters like the aforementioned Cobalion and Hippowdon are good partners with Enamorus-T. further explanation on why hazards would be good, like talking about how Stealth Rock chunk Fire-type Pokemon. Thundurus-T also gives Enamorus trouble, so teammates that can deal with it such as Assault Vest Cyclizar or your own Thundurus-T are appreciated. Because this set does not run Heavy Duty Boots, hazard removal is important to ensure that Enamorus-T is as healthy as possible when attempting a sweep gets a safe switchin, so teammates like Cyclizar or Maushold are appreciated.

 

[DaRotomMachine]

amcheck

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With its already good defensive stats and set-up moves in Iron Defense and Calm Mind, Double Dance Enamorus-T is an excellent wincon win condition that is difficult to remove once it starts setting up. Draining Kiss is important to help keep Enamorus-T healthy while or after setting up as longevity is what helps this set function. Earth Power gives Enamorus-T coverage against the Steel-, Poison- and Fire-type Pokemon every pokemon (except Moltres) that resists Draining Kiss such as Volcanion, Jirachi, and Gengar, with the exception of Moltres and Roton-H. Leftovers gives Enamorus-T some recovery while it sets up. The EV spread is meant for Enamorus-T to outspeed uninvested Registeel and anything slower, while being as bulky as possible. Terastallization helps Enamorus-T's ability to set up by helping it defensively; Tera Water gives Enamorus-T a Steel resist which helps it take Steel Type attacks like the aforementioned Steel Type’s Iron Head take on Iron Head users such as Cobalion and Jirachi. Tera Steel however removes its Electric weakness and also gives Enamorus-T a and grants a Steel resist as well as a Poison immunity which grants a Toxic immunity and helps it take Revavroom’s Gunk Shot and Gengar’s Sludge Bomb/Sludge Wave, but it requires being more careful around Fire types which can now beat Enamorus-T. Both Teras however also give an Ice resist which prevents mons Pokemon like Ice Beam Empoleon from weakening Enamorus-T to the point where it can be easily revenge killed.

Enamorus-T fits best on bulky offensive teams that allow it to set-up and sweep late-game once its checks have been chipped or removed. Moltres is one of Enamorus-T’s best answers, so teammates that can lure in Moltres such as Stone Edge Cobalion and Mienshao are good teammates to have. Enamorus-T also appreciates hazard support, so hazard setters like the aforementioned Cobalion and Hippowdon are good partners with Enamorus-T. Once you are looking for a sweep with Enamorus-T, hazards generally do not matter anymore at this point. I will let the QC team decide whether we keep it. Regardless, even if we keep it, further explanation on why hazards would be good is required, like talking about how Stealth Rock chunk Fire-type Pokemon. Thundurus-T also gives Enamorus trouble, so teammates that can deal with it such as Assault Vest Cyclizar or your own Thundurus-T are appreciated. Because this set does not run Heavy Duty Boots, hazard removal is important to ensure that Enamorus-T is as healthy as possible when attempting a sweep gets a safe switchin, so teammates like Cyclizar or Maushold are appreciated.

This is an amateur QC made by a member who is not part of the QC team and therefore does NOT constitute an official Quality Check.

Tho its amqc, Implemented, still waiting for QC 2

 

[Rarelyme]

qccheck

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With its already good defensive stats and set-up moves in Iron Defense and Calm Mind, Double Dance Enamorus-T is an excellent wincon win condition that is difficult to remove once it starts setting up. Draining Kiss is important to help keep Enamorus-T healthy while or after setting up as longevity is what helps this set function. Earth Power gives Enamorus-T coverage against the Steel-, Poison- and Fire-type Pokemon every pokemon (except Moltres) that resists Draining Kiss such as Volcanion, Jirachi, and Gengar, with the exception of Moltres and Rotom-H. Leftovers gives Enamorus-T some recovery while it sets up. The EV spread is meant for Enamorus-T to outspeed uninvested Registeel and anything slower, while being as bulky as possible. Terastallization helps Enamorus-T's ability to set up by helping it defensively; Tera Water gives Enamorus-T a Steel resist which helps it take Steel Type attacks like the aforementioned Steel Type’s Iron Head take on Iron Head users such as Cobalion and Jirachi. Tera Steel however removes its Electric weakness and also gives Enamorus-T a and grants a Steel resist as well as a Poison immunity which grants a Toxic immunity and helps it take Revavroom’s Gunk Shot and Gengar’s Sludge Bomb/Sludge Wave, but it requires being more careful around Fire types which can now beat Enamorus-T. Both Teras however also give an Ice resist which prevents mons Pokemon like Ice Beam Empoleon from weakening Enamorus-T to the point where it can be easily revenge killed.

Enamorus-T fits best on bulky offensive teams that allow it to set-up and sweep late-game once its checks have been chipped or removed. Moltres is one of Enamorus-T’s best answers, so teammates that can lure in Moltres such as Stone Edge Cobalion and Mienshao are good teammates to have. Enamorus-T also appreciates hazard support, so hazard setters like the aforementioned Cobalion and Hippowdon are good partners with Enamorus-T. further explanation on why hazards would be good, like talking about how Stealth Rock chunk Fire-type Pokemon. Thundurus-T also gives Enamorus trouble, so teammates that can deal with it such as Assault Vest Cyclizar or your own Thundurus-T are appreciated. Because this set does not run Heavy Duty Boots, hazard removal is important to ensure that Enamorus-T is as healthy as possible when attempting a sweep gets a safe switchin, so teammates like Cyclizar or Maushold are appreciated.

this is now a proper QC check DaRotomMachine, give it a second read to make sure everything is implemented correctly and you can go on to GP

 

[DaRotomMachine]

this is now a proper QC check DaRotomMachine, give it a second read to make sure everything is implemented correctly and you can go on to GP

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[Techno]

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[SET]
name: Double Dance
move 1: Iron Defense
move 2: Calm Mind
move 3: Draining Kiss
move 4: Earth Power
item: Leftovers
ability: Overcoat
nature: Bold
evs: 248 HP / 224 Def / 36 Spe
tera type: Water / Steel / Fairy

With its already good defensive stats and setup (rh) moves in Iron Defense and Calm Mind, Double Dance Enamorus-T is an excellent win condition wincon that is difficult for opponents to remove once it starts setting up. Draining Kiss is important to help keep Enamorus-T it healthy while or after setting up. Earth Power gives Enamorus-T coverage against the Steel-, Poison-, (ac) and Fire-type Pokemon that resists resist Draining Kiss with the exception of Moltres and Roton Rotom-H. Leftovers gives Enamorus-T some recovery while it sets up. The EV spread is meant for Enamorus-T gives it enough Speed to outspeed uninvested Registeel and anything slower (rc) while being as bulky as possible. Enamorus-T benefits alot a lot from Terastallization; Tera Water gives Enamorus-T it a resistance to Steel, (ac) resist which helps it take on Iron Head users such as Cobalion and Jirachi. Tera Steel removes its Electric weakness and grants it a resistance to Steel resist as well as an immunity to Poison, (ac) immunity which grants it a Toxic immunity and helps it take Revavroom’s Gunk Shot and Gengar’s Sludge Bomb/ and Sludge Wave, but it requires being more careful around Fire-types (ah). (remove space before period) Both Teras types also give Enamorus-T an resistance to Ice, (ac) resist which prevents Pokemon like Ice Beam Empoleon from weakening Enamorus-T it to the point where it can be revenge killed.

Enamorus-T fits best on bulky offensive teams that allow it to set up (rh, add space) and sweep late-game once its checks have been chipped or removed. Moltres is one of Enamorus-T’s best answers, so teammates that can lure in Moltres it in such as Stone Edge Cobalion and Mienshao are good teammates to have. Enamorus-T also appreciates entry hazard support, as they can chip down Fire-types that Enamorus-T it struggles with, so hazard setters like the aforementioned Cobalion and Hippowdon are good partners with Enamorus-T. Thundurus-T also gives Enamorus-T trouble, so teammates that can deal with it such as Assault Vest Cyclizar or your own Thundurus-T are appreciated. Because this set does not run Heavy-Duty (ah) Boots, hazard removal is important to ensure that Enamorus-T is as healthy as possible when attempting a sweep, so teammates like Cyclizar or Maushold are appreciated.


[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/darotommachine.651420/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/rarelyme.513635/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user4.103/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user5.104/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user6.105/

 

[DaRotomMachine]

hi heres an amcheck - feel free to implement if you'd like
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[SET]
name: Double Dance
move 1: Iron Defense
move 2: Calm Mind
move 3: Draining Kiss
move 4: Earth Power
item: Leftovers
ability: Overcoat
nature: Bold
evs: 248 HP / 224 Def / 36 Spe
tera type: Water / Steel / Fairy

With its already good defensive stats and setup (rh) moves in Iron Defense and Calm Mind, Double Dance Enamorus-T is an excellent win condition wincon that is difficult for opponents to remove once it starts setting up. Draining Kiss is important to help keep Enamorus-T it healthy while or after setting up. Earth Power gives Enamorus-T coverage against the Steel-, Poison-, (ac) and Fire-type Pokemon that resists resist Draining Kiss with the exception of Moltres and Roton Rotom-H. Leftovers gives Enamorus-T some recovery while it sets up. The EV spread is meant for Enamorus-T gives it enough Speed to outspeed uninvested Registeel and anything slower (rc) while being as bulky as possible. Enamorus-T benefits alot a lot from Terastallization; Tera Water gives Enamorus-T it a resistance to Steel, (ac) resist which helps it take on Iron Head users such as Cobalion and Jirachi. Tera Steel removes its Electric weakness and grants it a resistance to Steel resist as well as an immunity to Poison, (ac) immunity which grants it a Toxic immunity and helps it take Revavroom’s Gunk Shot and Gengar’s Sludge Bomb/ and Sludge Wave, but it requires being more careful around Fire-types (ah). (remove space before period) Both Teras types also give Enamorus-T an resistance to Ice, (ac) resist which prevents Pokemon like Ice Beam Empoleon from weakening Enamorus-T it to the point where it can be revenge killed.

Enamorus-T fits best on bulky offensive teams that allow it to set up (rh, add space) and sweep late-game once its checks have been chipped or removed. Moltres is one of Enamorus-T’s best answers, so teammates that can lure in Moltres it in such as Stone Edge Cobalion and Mienshao are good teammates to have. Enamorus-T also appreciates entry hazard support, as they can chip down Fire-types that Enamorus-T it struggles with, so hazard setters like the aforementioned Cobalion and Hippowdon are good partners with Enamorus-T. Thundurus-T also gives Enamorus-T trouble, so teammates that can deal with it such as Assault Vest Cyclizar or your own Thundurus-T are appreciated. Because this set does not run Heavy-Duty (ah) Boots, hazard removal is important to ensure that Enamorus-T is as healthy as possible when attempting a sweep, so teammates like Cyclizar or Maushold are appreciated.


[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/darotommachine.651420/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/rarelyme.513635/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user4.103/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user5.104/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user6.105/

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