[AAA] Alakazam

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darksylvion you can implement Zrp200 's check for gp 1/2, seems good enough; there are just a few things that i'd like to point out

Overview said:
Its post Mega ability Trace
add a hyphen between post and Mega and put commas around Trace (Its post-Mega ability, Trace,)
overview said:
powerful common abilities like Adaptability, Sheer Force, etc. as well as
comma between powerful and common; change it to Adaptability and Sheer Force -- "like" already implies "etc" and "etc" is bad in analyses (powerful, common abilities like Adaptability and Sheer Force, as well as)
overview said:
A mediocre defensive typing in Psychic and paper thin defenses
paper-thin defenses
overview said:
Magearna and Alolan Muk are common in the meta
metagame
overview said:
this is invaluable since
comma before since
set details said:
and up to Choice Scarf Xurkitree
remove the "up to"; you said most notably and it's obviously not most notably every mon it can outspeed
note to zrp: probs not a great idea to use underscores for spaces, cause people tend to keep the underscores when implementing, so just use (add space) or something like that
usage tips said:
Entry hazards limit the foe's opponent's opportunities to switch in checks even
this was unnecessary, considering the original was actually more correct
c&c said:
Celesteela, due to it's neutrality to Focus Blast and good special bulk, it can easily beat Mega-Alakazam (applies to both formes)
just changing the second "it" to "Celesteela" would've been fine

there were a few other things but im a little tired atm; a few unnecessary changes scattered throughout but otherwise a good check, so good job
 

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