WIP
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Decided to change the eyes to closed lids instead of wingding X-es, so as to portray the Comatose ability more clearly. The pose is supposed to be reminiscent of sleepwalkers (sleep-fliers?) as well as ribbons fluttering in the wind. I tried to go with
Granny Pie's color scheme suggestion of purple, green, orange, and black, but out of personal preference I changed the latter two to red and blue, respectively, to give it a more whimsical feel like a possessed children's toy. I also smoothed up the lineart with Illustrator and made some general fixes to detail line weights so the overall design looks clearer.
Alternate color scheme based on Granny's original suggestion:
https://i.imgur.com/Kc2LDwy.png
Yilx I like the reaper dragon better, though it could stand to portray the Comatose ability a bit better. Perhaps give it a sleepwalker-style pose with zombie arms and a drooping head? Sleepfloater? :P
Sunfished #3 is my favorite palette, too, so maybe you could go with that. Though I also like #4 for its look being reminiscent of sea angels, which are just as eerie as dragon slugs... Perhaps a composite of both with the pale white of the main body and the dark purple details?
Reigaheres Adorabuu~ Though perhaps the nightmare spirit could have an ominous glow lighting up the body from the inside to make it more etheral. The mouth and eyes already give me that impression.
Garbagery You know what your lovely Sleepy Turtle Boi reminds me of? A wrecking ball, TBH - but also a
Konaki-jiji. This is a yokai that tricks people into picking it up and then becomes so heavy that it crushes them under it. Perhaps instead of - or maybe along with - using his chain to trap stuff, maybe he could simply drop straight down on an opponent's head from above like those many-ton weights you see in old-timey cartoons and piledrive them to the ground with his face? XD